and the “Duh, dude” Award goes to… … this little gem: Jhayni awoke, thrashing in the sweaty tangled sheets like a panicked swimmer in water. In water, as opposed to, say, Jell-O. Or lava. Or orange juice. *headdesk* Progress: 137/244 pages
Hee! I think we all have those floating around waiting to be eliminated in our writing!
Sometimes I wonder if there are drugs in the hot chocolate I drink while writing…