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Wired, out now

A cybernetic Rapunzel in a post-apocalyptic world has plans of her own

Now available at Amazon US | Amazon UK | Barnes & Noble | Smashwords

A few things about Wired:

  • It’s a short story, about 4600 words long
  • You can read it for free on this site. Just go to the Works page and look under the Onsite Fiction heading
  • It’s free on Smashwords, but 99 cents on Amazon and B&N. That’s because those sites don’t allow me to set the price at zero. They may price-match, but I have no control over that.

And, last but not least, I hope you enjoy it!

so, what’s going on with Rainbird?

A few weeks ago, I drew back the curtains on my latest work-in-progress (and next self-published ebook).

Rainbird is a science fantasy novella that grew out of a short story I wrote last year. My protagonist, Rainbird, is both strong and vulnerable, generous and impulsive, determinedly cheerful in trying circumstances but, like everyone else, has her blind spots. The setting is the sunway, a gigantic track made from the bone of an immense dragon upon which this world’s artificial sun moves. Betrayal and love, atonement and duty are some of the themes of the story.

I have a cover for this book. I’ve had it beta-read, and two more people have said “yes” to reading it for one last spit-and-polish. I’m less than ten pages away from finishing version 4 of the story.

And I’m afraid to release it.

I didn’t recognize the fear, at first. I was going great guns on my latest pass through Rainbird when I just–stopped. And I haven’t touched it for almost a week.

I told myself that it was because we got sick (true). I told myself it was because we were busy (also true). I told myself I needed to work on another project whose deadline is coming up very soon (that too).

But those reasons merely disguised the real one: fear.

Fear that it will disappoint my readers. Fear that it will be savaged by reviewers. Fear that it will sink my fledgling career. Fear that it’s not perfect. I feel that if I only hold on to it a bit longer, it will magically become so.

Times like this I need to go read Kristine Kathryn Rusch’s wonderful post on perfection. I cried–or at least got teary-eyed–when I first read it. There is no such thing as a perfect story. There is no such thing as story that everyone, everywhere will love. There are just good stories that find their own fans.

As for Rainbird? I love this story. Some–not all–of my beta readers love this story. I know that I’ve done my best with it, and there is no way to make it better without tearing out its heart and turning it into something altogether different.

It’s time to kick the twin demons of Fear and Perfectionism to the curb. It’s time to get on with my copyedit so Rainbird can go seek its audience. It’s time to stop clinging and let go.

So, what’s going on with Rainbird?

It’s coming out this fall. Soon. Watch this space for the release date.

 

She’s a half-breed in hiding.

Rainbird never belonged. To one race, she’s chattel. To the other, she’s an abomination that should never have existed.

She lives on the sunway.

High above the ground, Rainbird is safe, as long as she does her job, keeps her head down, and never ever draws attention to herself.

But one act of sabotage is about to change everything.

For Rainbird. And for her world.

99-cent price for Unseen goes away tomorrow

Quick note: Tomorrow, I’m changing my intro 99-cent price for my recent release, Unseen. You can get it now at Amazon and Barnes & Noble, or at Smashwords using the half-off coupon code EP45Q (good until 8/8).

 

A Pakistani girl with a gift for seeing what no one else can incurs the wrath of a supernatural being. A pudgy accountant who sees far more than he wants to is chased by mysterious figures through the gloom of an industrial city. Both encounter what lies beyond the edges of the mundane world.

Unseen is a collection of two previously published short stories by Rabia Gale.

Now available on Amazon US | Amazon UK | Barnes & Noble | Smashwords

Smashwords 50% off coupon code: EP45Q (exp. 8/8/12)

second sight: autobiography in fiction

I hide in my stories.

I wear my characters like a disguise, blend into my made-up fantasy worlds, and weave incidents from my own life into extravagant plots. There are a few threads of reality in the tapestry of lies that is my fiction, but the casual reader would be hard-pressed to pick to those out.

And I like it that way. Sending my writing out into the world is hard enough. Putting out anything that delves deeply and openly into my own life and experiences feels like stripping down to to my skivvies and dancing on my car, yelling, “Hey, look at me!”

If you know me in real life, you’d know that I’d rather expire than do that.

Second Sight, though, is the fictional equivalent of dancing on my car in a state of undress.

When you read it, you can tell that I’ve obviously mined my own childhood for the story.  I never saw fairies in my yard in Karachi, but they might have flitted among the rose and jasmine bushes. I glimpsed no spooky beings in our mango trees, though it was easy to believe they dwelt there in the dark of the night. I didn’t live next-door to royalty-in-hiding, but I did live next door to the Unpainted House.

Even the supernatural creatures populating Second Sight have their roots in my childhood imagination. I invented Kaloo Baba (the Dark Man) as a bugaboo for my younger brother and cousins (and scared us all silly in the process). The Skeleton Man jumped out at me one evening when I was out walking–one of those peripherally-seen shapes that you think is something scary ready to pounce on you, but turns out to be rather commonplace. (You jump and possibly give a little screech,  but then you realize it was just your imagination and you look around, embarrassed, and hope that no one saw you.)

And then there’s Daria, wavering on the cusp of young womanhood, caught between being a child and a teenager. I get Daria, because she is so like my younger self. I get her struggle between wanting to be her own person and wanting to belong. I get her longing to be known and accepted for her whole self, strange gift and all. I understand her awkwardness and her uncertainty, her mixture of strength and fragility. I am proud and sad when I see how confident she is in her gift, but not about her gift.

Of all my fiction, Second Sight is the most autobiographical. And that’s not because of where it’s set, but who it’s about.

Here’s a beginning excerpt:

The fairies were fighting again.

Daria saw them out of the corner of her eye—wing-flutter, iridescent-flash—among the rose and jasmine bushes. Normally, she would’ve stopped to play peacemaker, but she was too excited and too nervous. Her thoughts skittered out of the garden, through the gate, and to one car out of the thousands in the mad rush of the city. She pictured it nosing through clogged streets, trundling over ruts and potholes, and fuming at stoplights as it brought Amir ever closer.

Daria ran a nervous hand down the front of her kameez, new and of a flattering dark green color, with blue embroidery at neck, hem and sleeves. Short sleeves, she thought, slightly scandalized and disbelieving. The wind caressed her bare, recently-waxed arms, raising goose bumps, and she resisted the urge to pull her dupatta over them.

“Well, well, what have we here? All dolled up and no mistake, Miss! Done something new with your hair, eh? Looks like it’s been tortured.”

Daria looked up at the Skeleton Man leaning over the wall. It wouldn’t do to ignore the Skeleton Man; he could carry a grudge longer than most people could remember what they had to be angry about.

“Mummy put it in a French braid.” She reached back and ran her fingers over it. Then, anxiously, “Do you really think it looks tortured?” A small part of her shook its head at her desperation. To be asking fashion advice from the Skeleton Man!

The Skeleton Man creaked as he peered down from the ten-foot-high boundary wall. “I suppose it’s all right.” His rusty voice softened. “In my day, the maidens wore their hair long and flowing down to their ankles, and the hem of their skirts filled entire rooms. Like flowers come alive they were, rustling over the grass as they strolled in the evening cool.” He looked doubtfully at her outfit. “But then, you’re too young to be collecting lovers.”

Embarrassment flooded Daria. “I’m not trying to impress anyone!” Her voice was higher than she’d intended. The gardener, coming around from the backyard, gave her an odd look, which she returned with a haughty tilt of her chin. The Skeleton Man cackled.

“Oh, very good! Just the look my Raheela would have given. That’ll teach the servants to speculate if their betters are mad.

Daria waited until the gardener had disappeared into the servants’ quarters before speaking. “They just don’t bother to see.”

“Haven’t you ever wondered if you really are mad?” pursued the Skeleton Man, slyly.

“No, just weird.” That’s what her former best friend had said. Then she’d told everyone else in their class about Daria’s stories and now they thought she was weird, too. She was glad that it was summer.

“Ow!” A tennis ball slammed against her left shin. Daria peered at the grimy circle imprinted upon her shalvar.

“It’s His Highness,” hissed the Skeleton Man.

The next-door boy swung over the boundary wall, climbed down the neem tree and came over to her with a careless, jaunty stride. Daria tensed. If the gardener should see! He’d be chased away with a rake, prince or not.

The prince sauntered past Daria, bent elegantly, and plucked the ball from where it had come to rest in a flowerbed. His brown, slender-fingered hand was covered with small cuts, old and new, and dirt lay under his fingernails. His clothes were faded with many washings and none too clean.

But he bent gold eyes on her, thick-lashed and clear, light and startling in his bronzed face. He looked her up and down, flashed her a white smile, and turned.

“Oi!” The gardener galloped out of the servants’ quarters and stopped, panting, next to Daria. “Young Miss, did you see the boy from next door?”

Daria sneaked a look to her left. As expected, the prince had vanished, swift and silent as a shadow. She thought she glimpsed the gold lining of his tattered tunic against the bark of a tree, but he was like water, fluid and slippery and hard to catch—or hold. He’d be gone over the rooftops.

“I didn’t see anyone.” Behind her, the Skeleton Man murmured, “Liar!”

“Those ruffians next door! Always trampling my plants, running around on my grass. They’re all heathens, turning on their infidel music late at night, singing and dancing from isha until fajr.”

Daria did not say that princes and the sons of princes were beyond the customs of common people. She looked at the Unpainted House where the prince lived. It was of drab and grey concrete, and the one big window upstairs was a gaping hole. But beyond the house lay the faint glimmering of minarets and domes, the lazy silken drift of flags of red and purple and gold, the blue haze of incense spiraling towards the sky… How to explain to the gardener that the prince straddled two worlds?

“There was no one here,” she repeated. Then, grandly, “Go back to your duties.” Grumbling about rapscallion boys, the gardener went.

A rustle in the tree top made her look up. The prince laid his lean hand briefly against his breast, above his heart. Daria sketched a slight curtsey, then half-waved, half-shooed. The prince melted back into bark and leaf and shadow.

You can find the rest of Second Sight in my short story collection, UNSEEN, now available on Amazon, Barnes & Noble and Smashwords.

How about you? How do you hide–or not hide–in your fiction?

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