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Afterthoughts: Witchblaze

WITCHBLAZE, the third book of The Reflected City series, is finally out! This has been my main writing project since summer 2019. Even when I was resting it or busy with life, it claimed a large chunk of my backbrain. In these Afterthoughts, I’m going to ramble about the process of writing this book–with plenty of spoilers–and I invite you to read along, if behind-the-scenes stuff is your thing. If not, no worries! Not everyone wants to see the stage machinery behind the special effects.

Otherwise, keep reading.

I knew very early in the process of developing this series that the third book would include witches and explore Arabella’s past. Back then, the working title of Book 3 was WITCHES AND WARDS. That had to change when Book 1 became GHOSTLIGHT, and I came up with WITCHBLAZE to fit the naming convention. I very much prefer the current title.

I had already written a small chunk of WITCHBLAZE by the time GHOULFIRE released. When I returned to it as my main project, however, I realized that I was missing a lot of plot and I couldn’t proceed without ironing it out beforehand. Specifically, I needed to figure out details of the witches’ rituals. So I researched, reading through books of medieval magic and herblore, looking up lunar phases and articles on Hecate. I try not to beat my readers over the head with all the research I did, but a lot of the choices I made about timeline, sacrifices, locations, elements, and herbs are based on what I read. I won’t bore you with all the details, but here’s an example: The South-East-North-West counter-clockwise movement of the rites in the book was because I’d read that going widdershins was for spells of loosening and unbinding. It fit what I wanted to do with the dark force, so I implemented it.

But while I had fun figuring out those logistical details, I was more concerned about the emotional core of the story. I knew that Witchblaze was going to be Arabella’s book in a way that the other two were not. I knew that a lot of dark stuff about her past was going to come out–some of it was a lot darker than I had even planned. When I think about Arabella, the word resilient comes to mind. She has to be, in order to come out of all those years in Umbrax as mentally and morally sound as she is. She’s the type to put the past behind her and face forward with resolution and zest. I admire her for that. But she hadn’t really finished processing the past and dealing with it. She pushed it down and pretended to her new friends in Lumen that her history was all sunshine and roses. So, of course, I had to make it all blow up in her face.

At the heart of it, I wanted Arabella to take a good hard look at herself and her choices, and decide what her identity was. Was she always going to be a witch’s brat–or something else?

Then there’s Trey. Thinking over the last two books, I feel like he’s been more honest with himself about the wounds in his past. But, he’s not coping with it in healthy way, either. Burnout was on my mind a lot when I was writing Trey, in the way he buried himself in work and hid his injury and needed people around him (like the longsuffering Nat) to force him to rest. Another thing he needed to realize was that he’d allowed others to take on all the burden of maintaining a relationship with him, and how that was untenable. One of the most emotional moments for me while writing the book was when Trey woke up in the wee hours of the morning, in pain after a nightmare, and realized how lonely he was. He needed that moment, that catalyst. It opened him up to begin mending his relationship with his father, something that I have long wanted him to do.

The development of Trey and Arabella’s relationship was also a huge concern of mine. In the previous books, I’d established they were attracted to each other, and liked and admired one another. But they needed a push to get to a deeper level of intimacy, ie: talking about painful things they would rather have left unsaid. I’m not a fan of plot devices that hinge on people not telling each other things, but I hope I made the emotions behind those decisions clear in this book.

I loved the cozy domestic scene between them at the beginning of the story, especially because I knew it wouldn’t last long (sorry, folks, but I had to do it). They were going along, liking each other, but basically letting outside parties and prior expectations dictate their romantic interests. That needed to stop. A lot of the events around matchmaking aunts and prospective spouses were meant to force both of them to face the question of, “What do I really want out of love and marriage?”

I hadn’t intended to send Arabella back into the Shadow Lands. It was just one of those things that showed up in my head as I was writing my way through that publicly embarrassing scene at Lady Kirkland’s ball. But it worked out really well for rebuilding the bridges between Trey and Arabella. The episode in the Shadow Lands took them away from the urgencies of their lives and the constraints of society long enough for an honest talk. (Plus, I enjoy writing scenes in the Shadow Lands. If you’ve read my other books, you know I enjoy weird settings.) I must’ve spent a week on the conversation Arabella and Trey had up in the conch-shaped vessel. I was that anxious to get it right because it was such a turning point in their relationship–and because she trusted him with her past, he was able to start trusting her with his later on, too.

I’ve said elsewhere that this is the longest book I’ve ever written. It would’ve been even longer had I stuck to all of my original ideas! Originally, the witches were to have completed all the sacrifices at the cardinal points and then finished off with a massive ritual in the center of Lumen. Then I got to about 50K words in the book, looked at where I was in the outline, and decided that I had to cut out the last step. By placing the western ritual in Shrine Park and tying it to Arabella/Arcana, I think I managed to make it work thematically rather well. Trey and Arabella met outside of Shrine Park for the first time in Ghostlight; I liked being able to circle back around to that setting. It makes it feel all neat and wrapped up. There was also some stuff around Rutherford that didn’t make it into the book. I hope that it will show up in the next in some form or another.

As always, secondary characters new and old entered the stage. I always try to make them seem as 3D as possible, without letting them steal the show. For example, I didn’t want either Mr. Rowley or Miss Marston to just be Obstacles to Love. I grew very fond of Miss Marston, and I very much didn’t want to let Arabella off the hook for leading Mr. Rowley on. The awkwardness of turning him down and his deep disappointment was something she had to face. He really did like her lot.

Speaking of secondary characters: the ending. I got to the point where Beatrice died and had a moment of panic when I realized that her death was going to have to overshadow everything from then on out. I had to honor Arabella’s very real grief and let it shade her interactions with Clara, her aunt, even Trey. The previous books ended on a more upbeat note, but I just couldn’t justify that with this one. Seeing her so sad also pushed Trey to break the rules. He let his desire and desperation to fix things overrule his good sense when he goes to see Astrofael. While reading the books of medieval magic, I was struck by the issue of ethics surrounding the practice of it. Talking to demons–especially by oneself–is a big no-no. There are too many ways they can lie and twist you up into pretzels. The link isn’t explicitly said out in Witchblaze (more on this in the next book), but his excursion to the Pit directly links to the book DAEMON slipping its tether.

Which brings me to that cliffhanger, which was one of those awful, wonderful Grinch-y idea one gets. It wasn’t in my plan for DAEMON to swallow up Trey, but honestly, that book wasn’t in my plan at all until it just showed up in Ghostlight while Arabella was exploring Trey’s library. Since my subconscious brought the book up in the first place, I gave it the responsibility of figuring out to do with it. And so DAEMON has Trey, which is terrible for everyone, because they’re about to find out just how much the rely on having a Border Walker around.

What’s next for The Reflected City series? As I write this in January 2021, I have yet to begin Soulbright, the fourth and final book. What I am doing is touching base with the story every couple of days by journaling about it. I’m waiting for the first chunk of the story to coalesce enough for me to begin writing. Right now, everything is just flashes and splinters of scenes with nothing connecting them.

Do you have any comments or questions about the writing of Witchblaze? Tell me below!

Now Out: Ghostlight

Trey would rather fight demons and exorcise haunts than attend a ball. Arabella is a debutante whose plans for an enjoyable Season are about to be permanently cut short when she’s separated from her body. Brought together by a chance encounter, the two race against time to return Arabella to her body—before the otherworldly Shadow Realms claim her.

GHOSTLIGHT, Book 1 of The Reflected City series, is a gaslamp fantasy in a Regency-esque setting. Now available at:

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Try before you buy! Chapters One and Two are available to read on this site.

Ghostlight, Chapter Two

Read Chapter One here!

Chapter Two

Arabella Trent was trapped in a pentagram five paces across from side to side.

She knew this because she had traversed its shape multiple times, testing the pentagram’s strength. After being thrown back by the wards every single instance, she had to concede defeat.

Besides, the buzz of angry magic hurt.

Even though I’m a ghost, I can still feel pain.

The thought was like an open pit in a stomach she didn’t have.

If she was a ghost, it meant that she—

—was dead.

“How can I be dead?” she demanded out loud to the empty chamber. “I don’t even remember how I got this way. There must be some mistake.”

No response.

A knot tightened in Arabella’s middle. Dead or not, she couldn’t bear being trapped. She had to get free.

Think.

She couldn’t get through the wards. Could she perhaps get under or over them? But the stone floor below her feet refused to allow her incorporeal body passage. And she couldn’t hover more than a few inches off the ground without being pressed back down as if by a giant’s hands.

Perhaps she could shift the anchors of the pentagram and nullify the spell that way? Arabella examined the floor, but the lines had been scored into the stone and inlaid with gold. The pentagram was made to be permanent.

Whatever happened to using plain old chalk? Not that it would’ve helped her much. She couldn’t affect the material world. Scuffing chalk lines was outside her scope.

Arabella paced her prison, hoping the exercise would either expose some weakness in the wards or dislodge a brilliant plan of escape from her stumped brain.

Neither occurred, but the activity did calm her down. Her fast, shallow breaths subsided—she wouldn’t think about the fact that she was not actually respiring—and rationality asserted itself.

This isn’t like those other times. It isn’t pitch dark and close. I’m not restrained and I can still see.

Arabella circled her current domain a few more times, then gave up her attempts to secure her freedom. The sight of the ground gleaming through her translucent feet made her feel ill.

She flopped onto the floor and drew her knees up to her chest. With a kind of distant surprise, she noted her clothing had changed. Instead of the shrine cloak and white robes, she wore her new high-necked walking dress of sea green with four inches of silver embroidery at the hem.

Arabella could take no pleasure from her pretty clothing. She was dead and stuck in some necromancer’s workroom.

And to think that only yesterday her biggest concern had been that her generous aunt and uncle had paid far too much for the ball gown she was to wear at Friday’s assembly!

Arabella stared out at the rest of the chamber she could not access. Judging from the thick, leaded windows set at the top of the walls, it was partially underground. The sunlight that flowed in was surprisingly warm and golden. She suspected that some sorcery was involved; a cellar workroom should not be so well-illuminated.

The rest of the space did not match Arabella’s preconceptions, either. The benches were piled with books and mathematical instruments instead of skulls, black candles, and jars of frogs’ toes and newts’ eyes. On the other side of the pentagram was a cleared space, with a practice dummy standing against one wall. Weapons lay in brackets affixed to the stone walls around it: swords of all sizes, a spear, a pike. The shelving underneath held padded armor.

Apparently Lord St. Ash was more into sword play than potion making.

Arabella scowled as she thought of the young nobleman. He had known from the start, of course. It wasn’t good manners or any interest in her well-being that had caused him to help her.

No, it was his job.

He worked in the Phantasm Bureau of the Foreign Office.  Arabella was aware that one of the Bureau’s duties was banishing spirits who overstayed their welcome in the mortal world.

Spirits like her.

He could’ve sent her straight to the Shadow Lands. Arabella shivered at the thought. The Shadow Lands lurked between this world and the afterlife, a place spoken of in whispers, where lost souls and demons and who knew what else wandered.

The pentagram was preferable. Perhaps her captor had a heart after all. A small one.

Arabella tried to recall all she had ever heard of Viscount St. Ash. Surprisingly for a peer’s son, it wasn’t much. The other young ladies never brought up his name when discussing prospective husbands. Aunt Cecilia had glossed over him when doing the same. Her cousin Harry had dropped more detail in passing conversation, but Arabella hadn’t paid much attention. She had never expected to have much to do with an earl’s heir, besides the occasional pre-season dance when Lumen was thin of company. She belonged to less exalted circles.

Arabella wrinkled her nose as she turned over what little she knew of the Shields. They were a powerful magical family headed by the Earl of Whitecross. The Shields were traditionally ferromentalists, magical sword masters, but the man who had imprisoned her in this pentagram had gone in a different direction altogether.

She had heard it whispered that he walked the Shadow Lands and fought against its denizens.

What was it they called him?

The Shade Hunter.

And she’d had the bad luck to encounter him, of all people, this morning. Arabella thought of how delighted and grateful she’d been, and winced. Worst of all, she’d chattered away, never suspecting he was hatching schemes to trap her in a pentagram for his sinister purposes.

Gloomy thoughts such as these occupied Arabella as the hours whiled away. The light changed, shifting across the floor, until it was gone. Twilight filled the chamber, soft and heavy and grey.

Arabella tried to hold on to her outrage, but by that time she was resigned to her captivity. And heartily bored.

So it was with relief that she heard sounds from upstairs—the slam of a door, the scuff of feet. He was back!

Arabella waited, but no one appeared at the cellar door. Instead, noises continued to emanate from upstairs. Several thuds vibrated through the ceiling. Was he dropping books or boots?

Annoyance rekindled inside Arabella. By the saints, she may be a ghost, but she was still a gentlewoman! How dare the unmannerly boor keep her waiting!

Arabella leapt to her feet and shouted, “Help! I’m down here! Help!”

Since she had no throat to feel parched, Arabella thought with malicious glee that she could keep yelling all night. If he doesn’t come soon, I promise that I will haunt him.

The door at the top of the stairs crashed open, then slammed shut. The cellar steps creaked as Lord St. Ash ran down them. Rune lights bloomed yellow in the glass-sided lanterns set into the wall ahead of him.

Arabella put her hands on her hips as His Lordship’s stockinged feet came into view. The rest of him followed, until a tall, lean man with tousled blond hair and wary grey eyes stood before her. His cravat was loosened and the plain brown vest he wore over a white linen shirt was unbuttoned.

Incongruously, he held a sandwich in his left hand.

“You,” she informed him frostily, “forgot about me.”

“And you,” said St. Ash, “have a very penetrating preternatural scream.” He grimaced. He had, Arabella realized, a very expressive face. It was quite different from the stony demeanor he’d put on at the supper dance.

“I apologize for that,” said Arabella with dignity, “but you left me no choice.” She gestured at the pentagram.

St. Ash’s eyes narrowed as he surveyed her. Arabella had the impression that he was making up his mind about something. She began to feel nervous. If he decided to thrust her into the Shadow Lands after all, there was nothing she could do about it.

Apparently she passed the test, for St. Ash said lightly, “You were quite safe down here, Miss Trent, if a trifle bored.”

“I should like an explanation, Lord St. Ash—” began Arabella.

“Trey,” he interrupted.

Arabella frowned at him.

He waved the sandwich at her. “I’m not used to all this ‘Lord this’ and ‘Milord that.’ It puts me off my food.”

Arabella remembered that he was actually the younger son. Hadn’t Cousin Harry mentioned his older brother had died last year?

Still, she couldn’t call him by his name. What would Aunt Cecilia say? She ignored his improper request to ask a more pressing question. “Why did you stick me in this pentagram?” she demanded. “I’m not going to harm anyone. Not even Priscilla Price, who called me a rustic mushroom last month.”

“Did she indeed?” He looked amused. “But, you know, she’s only like that towards those she perceives are a threat to her matrimonial ambitions.”

Miss Price was one of Lumen society’s acknowledged beauties. Arabella’s eyes widened. “Was that a compliment?”

“Well, you are rather pretty,” he owned. “But I’ve been told, by Miss Price herself, that I am no judge of these things.”

“I was pretty,” said Arabella gloomily. “And now I’m this.” She gestured at her aethereal form.

“Don’t be so cast down. There’s hope yet. As it turns out, you’re not completely dead.”

“What do you mean, sir?”

“Just that your comatose body is safely ensconced in your bedchamber right now.”

Arabella’s head spun. Lord St.—Trey was a blur in her vision. “What?”

“Are you going to faint? It’ll be the first time I’ve seen an apparition fall unconscious. I should take notes.” The dratted man put his sandwich on his worktable and shuffled papers.

“Of course I’m not! Please stop teasing and tell me properly.” Despite herself, her words ended on a tremble.

The laughter vanished from his face. “Poor girl.” His voice was gentle. “What a trying day you’ve had. Why don’t you sit down?”

A grey mist appeared inside the pentagram and solidified into the shape of a chair. Arabella touched the back of it, expecting her fingers to go through it.

They didn’t. The chair felt smooth and cool, like marble.

“What is this?”

“Aether.”

Arabella snatched her hand away. “Did you summon this from—?”

“The Shadow Lands? Yes.” Remarkable. He spoke the name as if it were the most commonplace thing in the world. “Do sit down, Miss Trent. The chair won’t bite.”

Arabella did so, gingerly. The magical chair wasn’t as hard as she’d expected, giving away slightly under her. “Arabella. If I am to call you Trey, you should call me Arabella.”

“Certainly.” Trey sat down on a bench and lifted his sandwich. “Do you mind? It’s late and I haven’t had supper yet.”

At her nod, he took a bite. Arabella felt a familiar empty feeling around her middle. “I’m hungry? How is that possible?”

“It hasn’t been long since you separated from your body. Your mind still remembers how you’re supposed to feel if you haven’t eaten all day.” Trey devoured the remainder of his sandwich while Arabella tried hard not to stare longingly and drool. Could a ghost salivate?

“About my body, though?” she queried.

“You’re still alive, though barely. Apparently, you slipped out of the house last evening without anyone knowing, dressed in your plainest clothes and a hooded cloak, like a girl on her way to an elopement.” He raised his eyebrows. “Were you eloping?”

“Of course not,” said Arabella crossly.

“Your aunt will be relieved. About dusk, you were hit by a hackney, according to a servant girl who witnessed the incident. You had run into the street after a stray kitten. You really are that kind of person, aren’t you?” Amusement was writ plain on his face.

“Better than being a heartless monster,” she flashed back. Goodness, he made her seem like a complete ninny. And he was the rudest man she had ever met.

He didn’t rise to the bait. “Do you remember anything from last night?”

Arabella tried, but there was a horrible blank stretch where her memories of yesterday evening should be. “I remember the dressmaker bringing my ball gown in the morning. We had stewed rabbit for luncheon. I visited with Charlotte and Viola and we talked of our excursion to Shrine Park. But after that…?” She screwed up her eyes, trying to force something to come to her.

“No need to try so hard. You’ll sprain something,” Trey advised her.

Arabella frowned. “If I was hit last evening, how come I was at Shrine Park this morning?” Her friends’ silence this morning made sense. She’d thought it was because they weren’t used to early hours. In actuality, they hadn’t been able to see her at all.

Still, they had gone on an excursion that she had wanted, most likely for her sake. The thought touched her.

“Your spirit knew where it was supposed to be this morning. With or without your body, it went.”

“If only I could remember what happened in the gap.” Arabella pressed her hands over her eyes. The gesture felt strange, cool and jelly-like. Arabella hastily removed them.

“It’s not uncommon for spirits to lose the memories surrounding their violent deaths. Or, in your case, disembodiment.”

“But my body is alive. Does that mean I can return to it?” She had clasped her hands together without realizing it.

“With a little help, I don’t see why not.”

A rush of relief swept over Arabella. “Thank you! Shall we go right now?” She was on her feet.

Trey waved a hand in a sit-down gesture. “Not so fast, Arabella. It’s not late enough—your family and servants will still be awake. We’ll leave after midnight.”

“Why the secrecy?” demanded Arabella. “My aunt and uncle will not eschew your help. I know they must be anxious and concerned.”

“We’ll keep this secret because I’m not supposed to be doing this.” Trey’s face lacked expression, and she saw, for the first time, the tired lines etched into it. “By the laws of the land and the rules of the Phantasm Bureau, I should’ve sent you on your way to the afterlife already.”

“But I’m still alive!” cried Arabella, appalled.

“Only because your aunt and uncle hired a sorcerer to put your barely-breathing self into stasis. That, by the way, comes very close to flirting with necromancy. Some would say that it crosses the line.” Trey paused. “Like, for instance, my supervisor.”

It all felt like a bad dream. “Will they get into trouble?” Arabella whispered.

“Only if they’re caught. Right now, all they’ve put out is that you’re unconscious after a bad accident. There’s precious few people who can tell your spirit’s gone wandering. And as long as any of them besides me don’t peek into your bedchamber, you’re safe.”

Arabella stiffened. “Are you saying, sir, that you were in my bedchamber?”

“Of course. I had to see for myself if your body was worth returning to. And your nightclothes are very fetching, as well.”

She eyed him, suspecting he was laughing at her again. Yes, that crook of his mouth and those lines around his eyes all indicated mirth. “I cannot believe that my aunt allowed you into my bedchamber.”

“Of course not. Charlie Blake distracted her while I went up to check.”

“Charlie Blake? Do you mean Charlotte?”

“She’s going by her Christian name now, eh?” He shook his head. “Well, I’ve known her as Charlie for years. Her older brother was up at Holyrood with me and I spent some of my holidays at the Blakes’.”

Holyrood University was where people with magical gifts were educated. “I have met Mr. Blake on occasion,” Arabella owned. “He’s a pyromentalist, isn’t he? I’ve never seen his salamander, though.”

“He works two stories below me now,” said Trey.

“Did you tell Charlotte about this?” Arabella made an eloquent gesture toward herself.

Trey shook his head. “No. The fewer people who know, the better. All I told Charlie was that I sensed something wrong and tracked it to your house. She didn’t ask any questions, just demanded I do my utmost to help.”

Arabella gave a laugh that was almost a sob. “That’s Charlotte all over.”

A frown deepened between Trey’s brows as he looked at her. “Jonathan Blake’s a reliable chap, and I gave him the details about you. If anything happens and I’m not there, go to the Blakes’ house. He won’t be able to see you, but his salamander will. Ember’s clever; she’ll help you out.”

“What awful things do you expect will happen?” said Arabella. The sinking feeling was back.

“None at all,” said Trey promptly. “It’s just a precaution. Chin up, Arabella. By tomorrow morning you’ll be waking up with a bad headache. You’ll be back to extorting money for Lady Holmstead’s orphans in no time.”

His matter-of-fact tone was surprisingly bracing. Arabella lifted her chin. “I won’t forget those hundred pounds, my lord.”

Trey cracked a smile. “Good girl.” He stood up, stretched his arms above his head, and yawned. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m in need of a few hours of rest.”

“What about me?” squeaked Arabella.

“This house is well-warded. No phantasmists will be able to sniff you out nor any necromancers summon you.” She knew he was pretending to misunderstand. “Just stay here.” He added kindly, “I’ll leave the lights on for you.”

And before Arabella could object to remaining confined in the pentagram, he was gone.

At least he’d left her the chair.

Ghostlight, Book One of The Reflected City, releases May 31st!

Ghostlight, Chapter One

Here’s a sneak peek at the first chapter of Ghostlight!

Chapter One

Trevelyan Shield knew Arabella Trent was trouble the moment he laid eyes on her that spring morning.

He was a trifle foxed, staggering home from the Plush Purple Peacock through streets filled with a pale golden haze. A happy fog occupied most, but not all, of his head. He could never quite turn off the watchful part that was currently keeping him from embracing a street lamp and attempting to waltz with it. Trey couldn’t quite understand why, but he was sure he’d be grateful for it later.

In the meantime, he had to navigate the early morning rush, a task that was more than usually difficult today.

Carts laden with milk and eggs trundled past him, pulled by dray horses who showed their pegasus heritage in vestigial wings and feathered hoofs. Their drivers shouted and cursed as the traffic inevitably snarled. Housewives on their way to market hurried down the footpath, jostling passersby with their large baskets. The pungent smells of spoiled milk and horse dung hung in the air.

All Trey wanted was his bed so he could block out the entirety of Lumen for a few blissful hours. A few hours to forget his life and his work, the dull heartache that still hadn’t eased, and the weight of the viscount’s title that he had never wanted.

And then he saw her.

Arabella Trent hesitated at the corner of Chipping Hill and Holgate, plainly waiting for an opening in the traffic. She wore a shrine cloak of traditional gray, its hood slipping off her head to reveal a riot of dark curls.

But it wasn’t the cloak that caught Trey’s attention, nor the curls. Neither did her large, lustrous eyes, nor her dainty nose, nor her slender figure—nor, indeed, any of the other considerable charms that Miss Trent possessed.

Rather, he was arrested by the way the sunlight shone through her translucent form.

Trey closed his eyes and counted to ten. Surely the apparition was a figment concocted by his exhausted mind and an excess of the Peacock’s excellent brandy. When he opened his eyes, she’d be gone.

He cracked an eyelid.

She was still there.

Trey considered a strategic retreat. He’d go home, send a message to the Office about the spirit, then fall face forward onto his bed.

After all, he had just spent half the night exorcising a particularly pernicious haunt. Dealing kindly and gently with a debutante was a trying exercise for him at the best of times. In his current state, it would be nigh on impossible.

The ghost of Arabella Trent turned and saw him. Pleased recognition lit up her eyes. She tilted her head at him in a way that invited, if not outright commanded, his help.

Trey struggled briefly with himself. Generations of good breeding won over selfish desire. With a mental farewell to his bed, which had retreated further and further away from him, he crossed the street to the young woman.

Her aethereal substance, he noted, gleamed with the luster of a pearl.

A relieved smile spread across Miss Trent’s face as he approached. “Lord St. Ash,” she greeted him with the title that still didn’t fit, “good morning.”

She had to have dimples, thought Trey darkly. Charming ones.

Miss Trent faltered at his expression. Trey knew just how forbidding it was, having cultivated it in front of his mirror as a boy.

“Miss Trent,” he said without preamble, “what are you doing here all by yourself?”

She looked stricken. Trey winced. He had just accused her of gross impropriety.

He was no good with very young women like her, dead or alive. He had never bothered to temper his blunt speech or aloof demeanor around them. At least he had never made Miss Trent cry. Not to his recollection, anyway. Still it’d be best to fetch Hilda who was far better at this…

The realization hit him like a bucketful of cold water, washing away the last mists of inebriation, leaving only a throbbing ache. Hilda wasn’t here anymore. Nor were so many of the other phantasmists. Not after the Incursion.

He had to do this on his own.

Miss Trent’s hands fluttered as she explained. “Oh! Of course I wasn’t here by myself. My friends and I formed a party to visit Shrine Park at dawn.” She gestured at the screen of yews behind her. “Somehow I was separated from them, and now I cannot seem to cross this street at all. I’m so glad you came, my lord! I was beginning to think I had turned completely invisible.”

You have. Trey bit down on the words, unable to say them with Miss Trent’s eyes meeting his with frank amusement.

Instead he looked over her shoulder to where Shrine Park brooded behind its barrier of evergreens and stone walls. The massive wrought-iron gates warned away rather than welcomed in.  It was like another world in there, quiet and weighty, cut off from the life of the city. Had this young woman died there? He found that hard to believe, not with the monastic orders keeping watch over the place.

“I didn’t know people still visited shrines during the Vernal Rites,” he remarked. High society was generally glad to leave religious obligations for Holy Week, which would begin in three days. “I thought it had fallen out of fashion.”

“Well, I am decidedly unfashionable.” Even as a ghost, Miss Trent was more animated than most people managed while being alive. Her eyes fairly danced with enthusiasm. “I came to Lumen late last autumn, and I want to see and do everything, no matter how rustic people think me. My friends were kind enough to indulge me by visiting the shrines today, but I have stupidly misplaced them and caused them trouble.” Faint frown lines appeared between her brows, a detail that wasn’t lost on Trey.

She must be very recently dead.

He was starting to feel sorry for her. It was a dangerous emotion, especially in his occupation. Apparitions often transformed from piteous victims to murderous specters with alarming rapidity.

But since this oblivious ghost showed no signs of growing fangs and attacking him, he merely said, “Then let me take you home, before your guardians are needlessly worried about you. You live with the Elliots, do you not?”

“Yes. Aunt Cecilia is my father’s sister. We reside on Crescent Circle, in Bottleham.”

“Come, then.” Trey caught the eye of an oncoming carter, gestured imperiously, and strode into the road. With a baleful glare, the driver reined in his horse. Behind him, other carters halted their own vehicles, cries of “Make way for the gentleman!” going down the whole line.

Miss Trent squeaked, gathered up her cloak and white skirt, and scurried after him. Her incorporeal feet made no sound on the dusty street, but she didn’t appear to notice.

She gave him an appreciative look as they stepped once more onto pavement. “Well done!”

“For managing to cross the road without being flattened? I thank you,” said Trey dryly.

His tone did nothing to dampen her merriment. “When I made the attempt, I was attacked by geese and almost run over. That is why I’m so impressed.”

Trey was tempted to explain that almost being run over was the least of Miss Trent’s troubles. But he settled for, “No geese in sight. You’re safe, Miss Trent.”

“Indeed.” She matched his longer strides with quick ones of her own, not complaining at the pace he set. “I can see you are one of those competent and useful sort of men. I’m glad you came along!”

Trey wasn’t. A headache pounded in his temples. However, he could hardly tell Miss Trent that he was contemplating the least bothersome way to send her off into her afterlife.

Pedestrian traffic gave way before Trey the same way the carters had. Maybe it was his air of unconscious authority or the hum of magic that surrounded him.

Or perhaps it was that he projected a formidable vexation.

Whatever the reason, the flow of laborers and housewives parted around him, giving him wider berth than was strictly necessary. Trey considered this to be for Miss Trent’s benefit—even an oblivious ghost like her could hardly fail to notice if she walked through a basket of mackerel. She certainly wouldn’t appreciate a close encounter with the fish’s silver scales and round eyes.

They proceeded in silence for a while as the crowds thinned out around them, before Miss Trent spoke again. “To be candid,” she confided, “I had always thought you a trifle aloof.”

“I thought you were being candid,” remarked Trey. “I think the word you’re looking for is disagreeable. Or maybe toplofty. Haughty?” He examined the pale sky above some chimney pots, weighing the word. “Yes, haughty would definitely do.”

“If you say so, my lord.” Dimples peeped in her cheeks again. Her hood had slipped off her glossy head, so he could clearly make out her expression with a quick glance. “I recall you displayed a lack of enthusiasm when you danced with me at the Holmsteads’ two weeks ago.”

“It was in self-defense.”

“From me?” Her brow furrowed.

“No.” He gave her a sideways look and grinned. “I have been battling all of society’s matrons for years. You were unfortunately caught in the crossfire.”

“Oh?” She looked intrigued and amused. “What is the nature of this conflict, my lord?”

Trey shrugged. “It is simply that I am young, unattached, and of good birth. It is my duty, according to society, to be available to even out numbers at a supper party or make a fourth at cards.”

“Or partner a lady who would otherwise have to sit out a dance,” Miss Trent put in. She sidled past two barrels some chandler had seen fit to place outside his shop. The stench of tallow filled the air.

“Precisely.” Trey’s lips twisted in a self-mocking smile. “I admit I have little use for social niceties, so I do my best to discourage hostesses from thinking of me when making up their guest lists. But perhaps I should not have told you.”

“I’ll take your secret to the grave,” she vowed in mock-seriousness.

A chill went over Trey. Out of habit, the fingers of his left hand curled, seeking a sword hilt.

Miss Trent gave him a slight, puzzled frown. She went on, less brightly, “For an instant back at the park, I was afraid you would turn on your heel and leave me to my fate on the street corner.”

“I almost did.” His own honesty startled him. Was it Miss Trent herself who invited confidences, or her circumstances? After all, as a ghost she no longer counted as a member of the polite society Trey kept at arm’s length. He pushed on. “So you see, Miss Trent, your first impression of me was the correct one. I am quite disagreeable.”

She didn’t answer. Glancing down at her, Trey saw a look of serious sympathy on her face. The expression sent a frisson of recognition through him, though he couldn’t remember why.

“It gets lonely, doesn’t it,” she said softly, “holding the world at a distance?”

Before he could respond, Miss Trent’s attention shifted. With a muffled exclamation, she darted ahead to where a cart stood in the street, surrounded by interested onlookers. “Stop it! Stop mistreating that unfortunate child at once.”

She hurried past the spectators, not noticing how the large right sleeve of her cloak dragged through the arm of a small man in a leather apron.

The brutish man in work-stained clothes did not, in fact, refrain from cuffing the cringing boy he held by one ear. Miss Trent’s vehemence was entirely wasted on him. Trey thought he’d better intervene before her wrath turned her into some grey-skinned hag with bat wings.

“You there!” Trey hailed the man. “What are you doing to that unfortunate child—I mean, that boy?”

The man craned his head towards Trey in bug-eyed surprise. “’E’s a thief, mister,” he said self-righteously. “Snatched an apple off me cart. I’s got to disc’pline ’im, see. Right useless piece of work, ’e is.” He shook the unlovely child who howled something to the effect that Tommy made him do it, it wasn’t his fault, and other details Trey had no interest in pursuing.

“Discipline!” exclaimed Miss Trent, flushed with indignation and still showing no signs of growing fangs. “That’s not discipline; it’s just taking his own nasty temper out on the boy!”

“Put the boy down, man. I can hardly hear myself think above his yowling.” Pain throbbed behind Trey’s eyes. He glared at the gathered onlookers and asked in a glacial tone, “Don’t you people have somewhere else to be?” At which point, they remembered several pressing appointments and dispersed, some in haste, others reluctantly.

The carter released his captive, who looked as if he would take to his heels. Trey prevented this by putting a hand on the urchin’s thin shoulder. The boy’s sharp-featured face was pinched under the grime.

“Hungry, are you?” he asked.

A wary look crept into the urchin’s eyes. His gaze flicked from Trey’s face to focus on something beyond his shoulder—

He was looking at Miss Trent. He could see her. Trey’s hand tightened and the boy yelped.

“Answer the gent, you!” The carter raised his hand to smack the boy, only to be stopped short by Trey’s cold glare.

“Yes! I’m ’ungry, sir,” said the thief in a rush. “’Twas only one apple, sir, and ’alf-rotted, too.”

“Now look ’ere,” roared the carter, anger suffusing his face at these aspersions cast on his fruit.

“How much?” snapped Trey.

“Beg pardon, sir?”

“Never mind,” muttered Trey. He fished in his pocket and came up with a copper coin. He tossed it at the carter. “Take this for your trouble. I’ll deal with the boy.”

The carter stared, first at Trey, then at the coin. Then he shrugged, as if washing his hands off the whole business and turned to his cart.

“My lord,” Miss Trent broke in, “I think we ought to—”

“Just a moment, Miss Trent!” said Trey. “I believe I’ve just volunteered to deal with this boy.” Just like I made you my problem, he thought ruefully.

It must be the effects of the Peacock’s brandy. He was normally not so quixotic.

Trey looked down at the urchin whose gaze was flickering back and forth between his two benefactors, eyes full of alarmed suspicion. “What’s your name, boy?”

“Jem, sir.” The boy straightened to attention.

“Well, Jem, I’m not in the habit of bailing out thieves, no matter what their age. But I’ll give you a chance to earn your keep. Lying and stealing won’t be tolerated, you will submit to a bath, and you’ll have to work. But in return you’ll get a warm place to sleep and food to fill your belly. What do you say? Be quick about it—I haven’t the time.”

Indecision warred in the boy’s expression. Trey waited. Finally, the urchin took a deep breath and squared his shoulders. “Aye, sir. I’ll do it.”

“Good boy.” Trey released his grip. “First thing, go to Hopechurch Street. You know where it is?” At the boy’s nod, Trey took a piece of paper from his pocket. He brought it to life with a touch. A strand of aether, shimmering gray, coiled itself into a series of runes, sinking into the fibers. Trey folded the missive into a complex shape, pressed his thumb into the place where the folds met. A sizzle and the Shield insignia appeared in fiery colors, holding the message shut.

“Golly!” Jem’s eyes went wide. Miss Trent, ghostly and glimmering and hovering a few inches off the pavement, looked on with interest.

“You know the Quadrangle?”

Jem blanched. “That place where they muck about with dead people and ’venging sp’rits and such?”

“That’s the one.” Trey’s grin was malicious. “Take this message to a man named Morgan who works there. You’ll have no trouble getting someone to point him out.”

“What then?” The boy’s expression was suspicious.

“Then you do as Morgan says. Congratulations, Jem. You are now a civil servant, the God-Father help us all.”

“You didn’ say that at first!” squawked the boy.

“Changing your mind?” Trey arched his eyebrows.

“’Course not. You said warm bed and full belly, right?” Jem snatched the message and stuffed it down his ragged shirt. “I’ll be there.” He glowered at Trey. “’Sides you got yer hands full ’ere, dontcha?” He ran off before Trey could say anything else.

Trey eyed the urchin’s departing figure, wondering if he would regret this. Morgan would give him an earful, no doubt, for saddling him with the boy. But people who saw apparitions were rare to begin with.  It wasn’t every day you ran into a seer.

Boy disposed of, he turned to face his bigger problem.

Miss Trent favored him with a long-suffering look. “I was going to say,” she remarked, “that Lady Holmstead’s new orphan house might be a good place for Jem.”

“Not for such a streetwise brat,” Trey countered. “Believe me, Morgan will do Jem a sight more good than all of Lady Holmstead’s matrons.”

“And here I thought you agreed that her orphan house was a most noble endeavor. You listened to me prose on about it for fully a quarter of an hour at her supper!”

“Did I? I was probably thinking of something else.” Trey resumed walking Crescent Circle-wards and Miss Trent fell in beside him. She didn’t appear to notice—or mind if she had—that he hadn’t offered her his arm.

“I hope you have also not forgotten your promise to donate a hundred pounds to the charity.”

Trey frowned. “I have a vague recollection of vowing such a thing to stop the prosing.”

Her dimples peeped again. “Yes, I do have a knack for acquiring large sums of money from our donors,” she said complacently.

“What a conniving chit you are,” Trey remarked without heat. “Was this your revenge for my lack of enthusiasm in dancing with you?”

“I would never.” The twinkle in her eyes belied her statement.

Miss Trent kept up a bright stream of chatter, mostly centered around her delight at the spring festivities in Lumen, which culminated in the grand assembly at Merrimack’s tomorrow night, followed by a procession to the Keep the morning after.

Trey listened in silence, partly because he didn’t want to be seen talking to empty air and partly out of bemusement. Most of the apparitions he encountered were decidedly insane. They certainly didn’t hold conversations about social events while he tried not to notice their long lashes or slender hands.

Miss Trent didn’t attract the notice of any other seers, though he couldn’t say the same for stray elementals. An undine rose from a muddy puddle to stare at the ghost out of silvered eyes. A flock of sylphs, mere diaphanous glimmers, darted above their heads before flying off to torment a sleeping tabby cat.

“And I have always wanted to see the Mirror of Elsinore up close,” Miss Trent finished. The Mirror, the centerpiece of the Procession, was a national treasure guarded zealously by the government and removed from its hiding place only once a year.

“You can’t,” said Trey crushingly. “They call it the Viewing, but no one’s allowed into the solar save for the Guardians. Revitalizing a priceless magical object that protects our borders is not a public spectacle.”

“Another time then,” said Miss Trent, uncrushed.

They were in Bottleham, a quiet genteel neighborhood of terraced houses in red brick rather than the white-washed stucco and gray stone of more modern architecture. A milkman’s cart and horse rattled by, two maids beat rugs on a stair railing, and an elderly gentleman took the air, followed by his gnome servant. Trey received some curious looks; no one else appeared to notice Miss Trent.

“It’s the house just up ahead, with the yellow door. Uncle Henry grumbles about the color, but I think it’s sunny and cheerful.” Miss Trent paused, her attention on the hackney pulled up to the house in question.

A tall, thin man, black bag in hand, sprang up the steps and was admitted inside.

“That’s Dr. Barkley, my aunt’s physician.” Miss Trent’s brows drew together.

A pair of girls, arms around each other, emerged from the house. Both looked pale and shaken, their heads bowed, not paying attention to anything else.

Which was good because Trey, with an inward sigh, recognized one of the two. Charlotte Blake—known to all her family as Charlie—was the younger sister of a college friend. The large, rambunctious Blake family had somewhat adopted him during those years; he’d spent many of his holidays in their rather ramshackle, but always lively, household.

And now he felt beholden to help the friend of a girl he fondly considered a younger sister.

“And those are my friends! Why, what has happened?” cried Miss Trent. She started forward, her feet rising a few inches from the ground.

“Miss Trent!” Trey added a compulsion to his command; Miss Trent turned to him, her feet settling back onto the ground.

“Is someone ill, my lord?” she whispered. In the stronger light, she looked more insubstantial than ever. “Or… or… is it…?”

Trey wished again he could hand this off to Hilda, who’d mothered everyone and had always known the right thing to say. But it was Trevelyan Shield who stood here now. He ran his hand through his already tousled hair. And it was still only Thursday.

Best get it over with.

“Miss Trent, raise your hand and look at it.”

“What?” She stared at him as she lifted her arm. “What’s wrong with—?”

Miss Trent glanced at her hand and froze. Her eyes grew wide. Her mouth rounded.

“You’ll have to forgive me, Miss Trent. I’m not at all good at breaking things gently.” Trey made a complicated gesture as she started to scream.

Miss Trent’s form glowed blue, collapsed into itself, and winked out.

Trey stared at the Elliots’ sunshine-yellow door.

It was, he knew, going to be another long day.

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